srx: as some are dedicated to spoil the work of others I have to clarify one thing,Only pictures uploaded by my SRX are originals the others are just cheap copies.
Anonymous5: Her face needs a bit of work. Her eyes look flat, and she needs more of a forehead.
There's a lot going on in the area where Bart's mouth, his arms, and his legs are... the silhouette becomes a little confusing which makes it a difficult read. This comes from negative shapes that are too small, and tangents (like the one between his left hand and the back of her calf). There's also a tangent between the picture frame and her foot, as well as the picture frame and the first spike in Bart's hair.
The lighting is a bit confused as well, as there is 'shade' on Bart's back, but none on the top sides of her calves and thighs.
I think if you draw through your shapes more you'll see a lot of these issues disappear.
Also, watch proportions. Bart's face is quite a bit larger than hers.
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There's a lot going on in the area where Bart's mouth, his arms, and his legs are... the silhouette becomes a little confusing which makes it a difficult read. This comes from negative shapes that are too small, and tangents (like the one between his left hand and the back of her calf). There's also a tangent between the picture frame and her foot, as well as the picture frame and the first spike in Bart's hair.
The lighting is a bit confused as well, as there is 'shade' on Bart's back, but none on the top sides of her calves and thighs.
I think if you draw through your shapes more you'll see a lot of these issues disappear.
Also, watch proportions. Bart's face is quite a bit larger than hers.
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