gamemkr0: I like the dick in her vagina, mouth, and hand, they all have great thickness while being shoved into her. I also like her fat hips, and teeny tiny feet. You captured her shape really well.
Her legs, ouch, I don't know how she moves with that terrible condition. In the movies, when her legs bent, lines were shown to show the bending in her legs. It just looks like she has some terrible disease. Especially because of the chicken scratching, seriously I'll talk more about that when at the end of this critique. I know that that's her belly button, but it looks like a blob of lines, and it honestly looks terrible. And then there's that huge gap between the dude in her vagina's legs. I get what you're going for, he's HUGE, but try to keep it cartoonish or realistic. That hand of her's is hard to make out as well.
Don't make the gaps in the legs that wide, and fix the position of his dick. It's too far down. Practice pussy juice and saliva too, at this stage in the fucking she should be drooling all over with with spit and juices.
Stop the chicken scratching, no seriously, it makes your works really, and I mean really hard to make out sometimes, other times your art skill shows through enough to ignore it, but, especially this one, makes it hard to see everything, I'm going to grill you hard if you chicken scratch again.
If you don't know the definition it's basically repeating the same line a bunch of times, because your not confident in your the first, even in the concept stage you shouldn't be chicken scratching, clean lines, maybe one or two.
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Her legs, ouch, I don't know how she moves with that terrible condition. In the movies, when her legs bent, lines were shown to show the bending in her legs. It just looks like she has some terrible disease. Especially because of the chicken scratching, seriously I'll talk more about that when at the end of this critique. I know that that's her belly button, but it looks like a blob of lines, and it honestly looks terrible. And then there's that huge gap between the dude in her vagina's legs. I get what you're going for, he's HUGE, but try to keep it cartoonish or realistic. That hand of her's is hard to make out as well.
Don't make the gaps in the legs that wide, and fix the position of his dick. It's too far down. Practice pussy juice and saliva too, at this stage in the fucking she should be drooling all over with with spit and juices.
Stop the chicken scratching, no seriously, it makes your works really, and I mean really hard to make out sometimes, other times your art skill shows through enough to ignore it, but, especially this one, makes it hard to see everything, I'm going to grill you hard if you chicken scratch again.
If you don't know the definition it's basically repeating the same line a bunch of times, because your not confident in your the first, even in the concept stage you shouldn't be chicken scratching, clean lines, maybe one or two.
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thank u for the critique :)