some_random_guy: I also have a bikini version that I have uploaded to Colors 3D's gallery under a different username... But I'd prefer to keep my more SFW identity separate from my NSFW identity as some_random_guy here in Paheal, so I won't be mentioning that username here. All I can say is... "Its a secret to everybody".
Anonymous1: @some_random_guy: I strongly suggest improving on anatomical structures, so lemme help you out here.
1) The head is way too large, disproportionate, and angular Now, I know you are trying to match the original artstyle, but if you plan to do that, make sure it correlates to the body.
2) The shoulders should arch to the neck due to the upper chest bones and muscle structures. After all, this is a female.
3) The arms should have some equidistance to them. The elbow points of the left and right arm are uneven.
4) The collarbone protrusions under the neck are a too long and high. It should only be a few inches above the start of the breast.
5) The breast and torso should align. So the hourglass figure you seem to be going for should have a wider upper chest as her core seems to suggest.
6) The nipples are a tad too large. Granted, they're not all the same. Usually, they should only take up to about 10%-15% in normal circumstances.
7) The breasts should have a natural sag to them, depending on size. Judging how you drew them, they should be a bit lower, and the accentuated bulge between the two is unecessary. That marking should signify pressure between the breasts, as if they are being pushed together or are in tension. So even an incredibly small indentation would be pushing it.
8) The torso and hips should connect in a hourglass-like shape, so the navel and vagina would have correct placement.
9) The vagina should not be that large, in fact, it shouldn't be that large in general. Her hips seem to suggest one motion, but her upper torso goes in another, so it makes it hard to define the legs.
10) The legs have very... interesting positioning. Her kneecaps should only be slightly defined, as they seem too exaggerated here. Also, thighs should NEVER be larger than the ass. Her calves also seem to be a little large. They should be a pretty good amount smaller than thighs.
I would mention the feet and hands, but they're basically Villager spoon hands, and only a style. Take this as constructive criticism, nothing is meant personal. Use these pointers to your advantage, and your drawings will improve more than they ever used to look like.
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1) The head is way too large, disproportionate, and angular Now, I know you are trying to match the original artstyle, but if you plan to do that, make sure it correlates to the body.
2) The shoulders should arch to the neck due to the upper chest bones and muscle structures. After all, this is a female.
3) The arms should have some equidistance to them. The elbow points of the left and right arm are uneven.
4) The collarbone protrusions under the neck are a too long and high. It should only be a few inches above the start of the breast.
5) The breast and torso should align. So the hourglass figure you seem to be going for should have a wider upper chest as her core seems to suggest.
6) The nipples are a tad too large. Granted, they're not all the same. Usually, they should only take up to about 10%-15% in normal circumstances.
7) The breasts should have a natural sag to them, depending on size. Judging how you drew them, they should be a bit lower, and the accentuated bulge between the two is unecessary. That marking should signify pressure between the breasts, as if they are being pushed together or are in tension. So even an incredibly small indentation would be pushing it.
8) The torso and hips should connect in a hourglass-like shape, so the navel and vagina would have correct placement.
9) The vagina should not be that large, in fact, it shouldn't be that large in general. Her hips seem to suggest one motion, but her upper torso goes in another, so it makes it hard to define the legs.
10) The legs have very... interesting positioning. Her kneecaps should only be slightly defined, as they seem too exaggerated here. Also, thighs should NEVER be larger than the ass. Her calves also seem to be a little large. They should be a pretty good amount smaller than thighs.
I would mention the feet and hands, but they're basically Villager spoon hands, and only a style. Take this as constructive criticism, nothing is meant personal. Use these pointers to your advantage, and your drawings will improve more than they ever used to look like.