Urbane_Guerrilla: Not there yet. And holding an invisible tray isn't what comes to mind when you think "erotic pose." Study figure drawing, practice, come back in five years if you still want to be a worldclass pornographer.
Nz: Not too bad for a first try actually (better than I could do, lol!) - some tips, work on drawing feet that are feet-shaped, not just round blocks with lines to mark the toes; why are there lines on the stomach, what's that meant to indicate? And those huge creases where the thighs are meeting the stomach are a bit much too.
And don't take Anonymous srsly, nobody else does. :P
And don't take Anonymous srsly, nobody else does. :P
Good thing he quit already