Anonymous4: Shading's meh. Coloring's good. Anatomy's gonky as fuck. Left thigh longer than right thigh, face is all manner of wrong, hips don't work that way, she doesn't appear to have any left side to her torso at all (the left arm flexed in the background like that would reveal some degree of her shoulder) and the tan/pale transition is so harsh it looks like she was spray-tanned while wearing a latex unitard-- plus, freckles don't work that way (if she had natural freckles on her face prior to tan, they would be darker than the rest of her skin-- freckles are caused by the same thing tans are).
"Working girl" tans are hot. "I got blindsided by a Guido" is not.
Anonymous6(4): And preemptive clarification on the "hips don't work that way" bit: the flesh of her left rear hip (above left buttock) appears to be directly connected to just below the right side of her ribs in the back, giving her a serious case of Escher Anatomy. This could easily be fixed by softening the line that extends into the lower back from the left hip and darkening the hinting of the curve where back muscle meets side. She also has a protrusion on her left buttock and no right buttock to speak of (the back of her right thigh appears to lead directly into her side).
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"Working girl" tans are hot. "I got blindsided by a Guido" is not.
B+ for effort. Greatly needs work.