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Roflcakes: Yeah, a shattered crystallised corpse. Some king!
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Chef_Retardee: Drawn like that buddy, nobody's going to admire you.
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BaffBlend: Would you mind telling me what I did wrong or how I can improve? As you can see, I still need a lot of practice. -_-@Chef Retardee:
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amantes: @BaffBlend: Just practice to polish up your lines. Also, the edge of the butt is too sharp.
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BaffBlend: @amantes: Yeah, outlines have always been my problem... but I didn't even notice the second issue. Thanks for pointing it out.
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amantes: @BaffBlend: Welcome. Also I just noticed the front right leg is kinda missing.
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BaffBlend: @amantes: Okay, wow, that was kind of an embarrassing mistake. This is why I opened a r34 account, so I could stop being just occasionally friend-flattered and people would actually tell me that I was making these mistakes. :p
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amantes: @BaffBlend: Hehe it's good that you're trying to take criticism to improve =)) I know that friends would often flatter your works even when they're full of mistakes, they do it to me too xD


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