Anonymous1: Hey, I'm no Voslar, but here's something.
"This is heaven," Rarity mindlessly attempted to speak, but any utterance was reduced to a mild humming as a result of the quivering mound of pony in front of her. Surely her destiny must've been to worship the delightful roundness she was presently buried inside, despite what her cutie mark may otherwise denote. Rarity was jolted back into lucidness by a soft moan emanating from the yellow pony, slightly muffled from having pressed her face into the silken blanket. She had been pleasuring the shy pegasus for nearly an hour, or so she had thought. It easily could've been longer; she had spent the time in an lustful haze, senses dulled by ecstasy. Judging from the deluge exiting the mare and consequently soaked blanket, "Yes," Rarity concluded, "It must've been longer." Having finished the thought, the purple-maned beauty returned to her worship. She lapped eagerly at every fold of Fluttershy's womanhood; delicately pressing her face into the soft flesh and gently teasing each sensitive spot. Randomly, she would alternate to her other opening, earning a panicked yelp from the pegasus. Those too, would be reduced into light moans, eliciting another switch to prolong orgasm for as long as possible. Eventually, the treatment had pushed Fluttershy to her absolute limit. "R-r-rarity... I'm going to-" Rarity smirked; this was where the fun began.
Her horn lit with a ethereal glow and a figure, shaped vaguely like a human hand, emerged from the magical cloud. SLAP. The light yellow pony cried out in pain as the hand roughly struck her flank, causing a ripple of pink-tinted flesh to flow across her ample plot. Fluttershy grew fearful as she realized what Rarity intended for the mare, but she was too numbed from pleasure to generate any sizable protest.
Several hours later, the hand faded into nothingness. Fluttershy, her tongue lolling out of her mouth producing an ample stream of saliva and eyes glazed over, failed to notice. Rarity withdrew her face, thoroughly soaked in the pegasus' juices. With a gleeful smirk, she rose her hoof and struck the pony's womanhood. Fluttershy's head bolted up and every muscle of her body tensed as she experienced a mind-shattering orgasm. Secretions flowed freely from her openings and pooled onto the floor of the room, even after she had passed out.
Rarity stepped back and looked at the mess of a pony she had teased into unconsciousness and decided that she was right, it was her destiny to service that adorable, plump flank. She would do this more often; MUCH more often.
Nuxersopus: Also, lighten up stingray970. Your stuff isn't even bad and with more practice you could be able to produce great art.
Gomenasai went from generic stuff to true masterpieces in only one year.
Voslar: Not shabby, not shabby at all... also, for all that I write about Fluttercock, it occurs to me that I'm not sure how Flutterpuss would taste. Hmm. This bears deliberation.
@Sobana: The longer you write, the more you pick up speed. In the beginning I could take all night to write half a page.
Anonymous4(1): @Voslar: The god has praised my work as half-decent! My life is complete!
On the subject of time, I spent around 15 minutes on it once I actually started writing. I must've spent at least 10 more prior pondering how to incorporate "This is heaven" into the beginning in a non-retarded fashion.
nightmare_cat: Hey EVERYPONY * YEAH I USE EVERYPONY I WORK AT DERPY MAIL IN EQUESTRIA WOOOOOOO( FUCK im druck as hell right now sorry) THE RULE ME AND LIKE HALF OF PONYVILLE HAD TO FOLLOW HAS BEEN LIFTED I CAN FUCK WHO EVER AND WHATEVER I WANT WOOOO IM GOING TO GO RAPE A ROCK BYE!
"This is heaven," Rarity mindlessly attempted to speak, but any utterance was reduced to a mild humming as a result of the quivering mound of pony in front of her. Surely her destiny must've been to worship the delightful roundness she was presently buried inside, despite what her cutie mark may otherwise denote. Rarity was jolted back into lucidness by a soft moan emanating from the yellow pony, slightly muffled from having pressed her face into the silken blanket. She had been pleasuring the shy pegasus for nearly an hour, or so she had thought. It easily could've been longer; she had spent the time in an lustful haze, senses dulled by ecstasy. Judging from the deluge exiting the mare and consequently soaked blanket, "Yes," Rarity concluded, "It must've been longer." Having finished the thought, the purple-maned beauty returned to her worship. She lapped eagerly at every fold of Fluttershy's womanhood; delicately pressing her face into the soft flesh and gently teasing each sensitive spot. Randomly, she would alternate to her other opening, earning a panicked yelp from the pegasus. Those too, would be reduced into light moans, eliciting another switch to prolong orgasm for as long as possible. Eventually, the treatment had pushed Fluttershy to her absolute limit. "R-r-rarity... I'm going to-" Rarity smirked; this was where the fun began.
Her horn lit with a ethereal glow and a figure, shaped vaguely like a human hand, emerged from the magical cloud. SLAP. The light yellow pony cried out in pain as the hand roughly struck her flank, causing a ripple of pink-tinted flesh to flow across her ample plot. Fluttershy grew fearful as she realized what Rarity intended for the mare, but she was too numbed from pleasure to generate any sizable protest.
Several hours later, the hand faded into nothingness. Fluttershy, her tongue lolling out of her mouth producing an ample stream of saliva and eyes glazed over, failed to notice. Rarity withdrew her face, thoroughly soaked in the pegasus' juices. With a gleeful smirk, she rose her hoof and struck the pony's womanhood. Fluttershy's head bolted up and every muscle of her body tensed as she experienced a mind-shattering orgasm. Secretions flowed freely from her openings and pooled onto the floor of the room, even after she had passed out.
Rarity stepped back and looked at the mess of a pony she had teased into unconsciousness and decided that she was right, it was her destiny to service that adorable, plump flank. She would do this more often; MUCH more often.
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Also, nice use on the word plot and why did it take her several hours to cum? Rarity must have been doing a bad job...
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>no one will ever care to read
If I didn't know better, I'd say you must be new here.
That said, not bad. Needs work.
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Awesome pic btw
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Gomenasai went from generic stuff to true masterpieces in only one year.
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@Sobana: The longer you write, the more you pick up speed. In the beginning I could take all night to write half a page.
On the subject of time, I spent around 15 minutes on it once I actually started writing. I must've spent at least 10 more prior pondering how to incorporate "This is heaven" into the beginning in a non-retarded fashion.
You must be new here...
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