AnonV3: @Krysa_Alisa: As illustrate. your trollish ways have tainted you forever in the eyes of artists as a troll and they discount even your neutral critiques.
I only kinda agree. Trace a line around her jawline and up - the back-top of her head is about here the line of the top-top of her head ought to be. Since her head is slightly tilted down, her head ought be a bit bigger - but I don't know if changing that one thing will throw off her proportions other ways. Her shoulders seem a bit wide but her torso is about the size it ought be. Regardless, I don't think the head detracts very much (if, honestly, at all) from the art itself. The colors are a bit 'sketchy water color' for my personal taste but there's nothing wrong with that. And this is probably either meant to be sketchy or a sketch in progress. Darker skin with that hair is a bit odd - customer is always right I suppose.
LOVE the character shading. Lighting seems spot-on too. Hand - always one of the more difficult parts of the human body - is about perfect. I give it an 8.5/10 and those points are for personal preference mostly. This is pretty dang good, good job!
BlueZorua: @AnonV3: Well said, well said. You sir have earned a permanent place in my heart as one of the most respected, and intelligent people on Rule 34 with that comment!
I only kinda agree. Trace a line around her jawline and up - the back-top of her head is about here the line of the top-top of her head ought to be. Since her head is slightly tilted down, her head ought be a bit bigger - but I don't know if changing that one thing will throw off her proportions other ways. Her shoulders seem a bit wide but her torso is about the size it ought be. Regardless, I don't think the head detracts very much (if, honestly, at all) from the art itself. The colors are a bit 'sketchy water color' for my personal taste but there's nothing wrong with that. And this is probably either meant to be sketchy or a sketch in progress. Darker skin with that hair is a bit odd - customer is always right I suppose.
LOVE the character shading. Lighting seems spot-on too. Hand - always one of the more difficult parts of the human body - is about perfect. I give it an 8.5/10 and those points are for personal preference mostly. This is pretty dang good, good job!
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