crapforbrains: Overall it's a great first effort! Keep working on hands (and probably feet, a lot of people struggle with those), and maybe use a little less shine on the eyes, because it looks like you're covering just a BIT more of the iris than is necessary. Also, the pecs are defined a little too much, which makes them look like breasts (Well, the left one looks like a breast, I suppose the right one is OK). If you play around with the same kind of definition you used on her abs, that should fix it, unless your intention was to give her boobs. I would also suggest paying closer attention to lighting if you're going to give your subject a shadow. The light seems to be hitting her from her right based on the highlights, but her shadow is also being cast to the right, when you'd expect it to be cast to the left. Finally, the hair seems to be a little off, color-wise (You have a more yellowish shade of orange, but the screenshots I've seen call for a more reddish orange). Assuming this was done digitally, did you use some kind of color-matching tool on a screenshot? If not, that would be my recommendation.
Anyways, on to the good! The head came out great (and there's some complex geometry at play there, so that's actually saying something), and you did some fine work on Gwen's abs. She looks nice and toned here, which fits her nicely. Her hair is also shaded quite well. The expression you gave her is pretty lively, too, which can make or break any image of a character like Gwen.
TM97: Thanks! Will take all of that into account. I just got my digital art program and I'm still rather amateur at it. I don't know if there's a color matching tool. Believe it or not. Thanks again!
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Anyways, on to the good! The head came out great (and there's some complex geometry at play there, so that's actually saying something), and you did some fine work on Gwen's abs. She looks nice and toned here, which fits her nicely. Her hair is also shaded quite well. The expression you gave her is pretty lively, too, which can make or break any image of a character like Gwen.
Hope to see more from you in the future!
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