darkmatter: Not bad! well made animation. although the right foot of Goku should stay in place, and with a small shadow below... to make it look grounded and consistent with the couch in the background.
GenoThree: Yes, that part came out a little odd. They are actually on a black couch, and Goku's foot is balanced in the air (this is more obvious in other parts I'm working on) so the layout is strange. I can always have his foot resting on a table or something.
darkmatter: sorry I didn't notice the couch... although you can't really balance yourself in the air, it makes it look a bit strange. Maybe a short/low table like you said would look good.
Anonymous1: This a gif attractive and successful African...any man that's ever gotten laid or strap on bitch knows you can balance ya fuckin leg I'n the air for a short moment before resting or switching positions..animations awsome,positions awsome n you are awsome..cant wait for more of ya shit
darkmatter: @Anonymous: There is no need to insult me or question my manhood. I merely stated that the leg in the air looks awkward, and the criticism wasn't meant to insult him, but to show him that his animation is worth improving, because It's good and it could be much better.
If something is worth criticism then it means it is valuable.
Dyrone: @GenoThree: I would scrap the couch idea...they look like they are on the floor from this perspective anyways...why go through the trouble of adding a table when you can just delete the couch small bit of couch and plant his foot on the floor?
GenoThree: I've made a (significantly) improved version here:
>>2744944 Also there will be other scenes here so the layout of the couch is actually important here.
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If something is worth criticism then it means it is valuable.
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Also there will be other scenes here so the layout of the couch is actually important here.
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