Anonymous1: Her arms are too long, the shoulders are unaligned, the breasts are too high and the nipples aren't where they should be. Her left arm is longer than the other and the right and is larger than the other. The vagina starts too high on the pubic bone and the torso is too short. The face is the only thing not utterly fucked up.
This is by no means outstanding, but the coloring is nice. It's surprising how well a good coloring can disguise terrible lineart.
Cactus: @Homestruck:
Yes, I didn't say or imply it wasn't. Just that I don't pay attention to those small details. I don't think I take porn as seriously as I should, do I?
Deathcock: ^ Stop deluding yourself. This is a drawing, so it's not JUST "porn," so these things matter a lot. Anon1 pointed out some good points, so now it's bothering me. But he forgot one.
@Anonymous: "The face is the only thing not utterly fucked up?" This is totally untrue. On the contrary, the face IS totally fucked up.
The eyes are too big, and the pupils are massively dilated; the nose is too small, and improperly position on the face (not to mention being nothing more than a mere hive-like bump; and the mouth is smaller than it's even anatomically possible to be. I think I'll let that slide, since this is a cartoon character, and doesn't have to look like a human face, but since the rest of her body is drawn with more detail than the average cartoon, then the face should be realistically proportioned like a real girl's face, too..
Cactus: @Deathcock:
Stop pulling things out of your ass. I didn't say that. I did say however that I don't take pornographic drawings as seriously as I should. Is that specific enough for you?
Also, while anon1 is RIGHT about all those details, I don't think you are when you say that the face should be realistically proportioned like a real girl's face; those features are characteristics of the anime/manga/whatever style, and I don't see anything fucked up in this.
TBH I'd rather have FP in any style other than realistic.
Anonymous3(1): @RogerS: Feel free to continue fapping; no one forces you to even glance at the comments. But my autism demands I point out amateurish flaws in what is praised as "outstanding" artwork.
Deathcock: @Cactus: "Also, while anon1 is RIGHT about all those details, I don't think you are when you say that the face should be realistically proportioned like a real girl's face; those features are characteristics of the anime/manga/whatever style, and I don't see anything fucked up in this."
ButtercupSaiyan: It's not like Adventure Time prides itself on accuracy. In fact, I kind of expect the rule34 to be consistent to the show's look but I never find any that get it right.
If I had to go for second best, I'd go for something representational like this. The problem with criticism like this is, it's not even criticism. It's a list of bitching. Like I noticed the nose and mouth were too far to the side on the face, but that's a symmetry error. The only other errors that truly stuck out were not drawing the breasts correctly.
But then you must ask yourself, if AT is very very stylized and not supposed to be true to anatomy or reality, why the HELL would you expect its porn to be? The last artist I knew like that was Pandora's Box.
Oh yeah, and having a different opinion also makes you a troll, kids. Don't forget that.
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Anon1 said everything! I enjoy art criticism done right, just like this - You point out everything; I read it, then I look at the image again just to see it all, slapping me on the face.
Simply saying "Nah, this sucks" is stupid and vague.
"It's surprising how well a good coloring can disguise terrible lineart."
I was about to say "You would not believe how many artists are saved by this ability" but I think you know it pretty well already. Pretty colors and shading are candy for the eyes! :P
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This is by no means outstanding, but the coloring is nice. It's surprising how well a good coloring can disguise terrible lineart.
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...or most people don't care about the minimal details in general.
I came to enjoy my porn and not act like I'm some kind of art critic.
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Yes, I didn't say or imply it wasn't. Just that I don't pay attention to those small details. I don't think I take porn as seriously as I should, do I?
But fuck you anon1 this pic is perfect.
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@Anonymous: "The face is the only thing not utterly fucked up?" This is totally untrue. On the contrary, the face IS totally fucked up.
The eyes are too big, and the pupils are massively dilated; the nose is too small, and improperly position on the face (not to mention being nothing more than a mere hive-like bump; and the mouth is smaller than it's even anatomically possible to be. I think I'll let that slide, since this is a cartoon character, and doesn't have to look like a human face, but since the rest of her body is drawn with more detail than the average cartoon, then the face should be realistically proportioned like a real girl's face, too..
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Stop pulling things out of your ass. I didn't say that. I did say however that I don't take pornographic drawings as seriously as I should. Is that specific enough for you?
Also, while anon1 is RIGHT about all those details, I don't think you are when you say that the face should be realistically proportioned like a real girl's face; those features are characteristics of the anime/manga/whatever style, and I don't see anything fucked up in this.
TBH I'd rather have FP in any style other than realistic.
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Tardstrength engage.
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It's a sickness, I know.
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LMAO XD
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If I had to go for second best, I'd go for something representational like this. The problem with criticism like this is, it's not even criticism. It's a list of bitching. Like I noticed the nose and mouth were too far to the side on the face, but that's a symmetry error. The only other errors that truly stuck out were not drawing the breasts correctly.
But then you must ask yourself, if AT is very very stylized and not supposed to be true to anatomy or reality, why the HELL would you expect its porn to be? The last artist I knew like that was Pandora's Box.
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I don't want to live on this planet anymore.
Oh yeah, and having a different opinion also makes you a troll, kids. Don't forget that.
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Anon1 said everything! I enjoy art criticism done right, just like this - You point out everything; I read it, then I look at the image again just to see it all, slapping me on the face.
Simply saying "Nah, this sucks" is stupid and vague.
"It's surprising how well a good coloring can disguise terrible lineart."
I was about to say "You would not believe how many artists are saved by this ability" but I think you know it pretty well already. Pretty colors and shading are candy for the eyes! :P